Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Ah shit, I forgot what I was going to write about (2nd Opinion time!)
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UnNews:Ah shit, I forgot what I was going to write about[edit source]
Review away! This is a true story. - UnIdiot | 
| Talk | Contribs - 20:55, Apr 3
| Humour: | 6.4 | It was mainly a lot of chuckles. You managed to keep the idea fresh, instead of tiring it out. |
| Concept: | 6.5 | I thought it wasn't that original, but you put it in an UnNews article, and I haven't seen any other UnNews like this. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.4 | There were a few question marks and apostrophes that needed to be there, but it was easy to read. I also liked how you stated what you would've done each paragraph if you remembered the idea. The use of CAPITAL BOLD FONT was very fitting. |
| Images: | 7 | The images, I guess, were fitting considering you DIDN'T REMEMBER THE TOPIC (how was that). I really liked that "ANOTHER FUCKING USELESS PICTURE" thingy. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.9 | I really don't know what to put here. |
| Final Score: | 34.2 | This is a pretty good article, with possibility to be featured. But in order for it to be featured, I think you should fix some of the minor grammatical errors and maybe add an extra picture. I like this one. Keep it up. |
| Reviewer: | --Fist of Judgement 01:47, 4 April 2008 (UTC) | |