Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:The Autobiography of Jesus of Nazareth
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UnBooks:The Autobiography of Jesus of Nazareth[edit source]
Looking to get a few things answered. Is the length good, or should I add another section or two? Does my wording/language stay consistant throughout, and is there anywhere where the wording gets bogged down? Ummmm..... I think that might be it. Oh, and funny of course. Woody On Fire! 
Talking Woody Stalking Woody 14:21, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | The tone is simply too serious in some parts, while the overall story has a lot of funny potential, there aren't many witty one-liners that would add to the humor factor. |
| Concept: | 10 | This is a very good idea. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Jesus would probably be just a tad more intelligent sounding. And you ramble on occassion (not badly). |
| Images: | 10 | Your pictures and comments are very good. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | It just needs to be a bit wittier, more jokes in general. |
| Final Score: | 42 | 42 |
| Reviewer: | Neighborofthebeast 19:41, 18 June 2009 (UTC) | |