Advice, si vous plais.
-- Le Cejak • <-> 19:35, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
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7
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some good chuckles, but nothing sparkling.
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Concept:
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7
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good concept, although the title is a little misleading. it sounds like it might include accounts of actual machete battles.
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Prose and formatting:
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9.9
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no faults here. maybe move an image to the left to make your article sexier.
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Images:
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7.5
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love the monkey one, the other ones are acceptable. throw a caption on the gnome one.
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Miscellaneous:
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10
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love the abandoned places part
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Final Score:
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41.4
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a solid article worthy of both praise and betterment. i'd like to see some accounts of famous machete battles. maybe try for a slightly more encyclopeic tone, while keeping the veiled references to being terrorized in 'nam and the general macho tone also.
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Reviewer:
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--SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 06:57, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
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