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Tropical cyclone[edit source]
I want to see how well this reviews. There is significant information in the history of this as well if it makes it easier to review... Pup
- well, what the hell, I'll do it. gimme a few hours, it will be done tonight :) -- 19:01 EST 8 Feb 2010
| Humour: | 8.5 | I didn't expect that to happen at all lol. well obviously this review isn't going to be incredibly in-depth because of the nature of your article, but I'll still give you a faithful rendition.
I kind of knew something was up when I couldn't highlight any of the text, the format was kinda wikipedia-ish, or click on the image, but again, I didn't expect the entire article to disappear. Right now I don't know how you did it (I'll look at the source on the edit page in a second), but this certainly made me chuckle. |
| Concept: | 9 | This is a fairly good concept and it damn sure is original. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Now, I really don't want to sound nitpicky since I'm sure a ton of work went into making the .gif for this, but it looks too much like a wikipedia article (the font, size, style, image etc. would it be possible to do the exact same idea and words with an uncyclopedia entry? sorry if that sounds kinda crappy on my part, but like I said earlier, I knew something was up since it didn't look quite like an uncyclopedia article. Another thing (And I don't know if it's something intrinsic with the site, my browser (firefox) or whatever, but it's hard to reload the page. Most times when I reload after the .gif does its stuff, the article is blank still. Not sure what anyone can do about that, but it seemed like a limitation in my mind (just an impression) |
| Images: | 7 | well, I like the caption on the first picture and I know that the images really aren't important to the joke, but your images are still kind of boring. I think if you had funnier images it would make it easier to trap people into staying on the page long enough to have it disappear.
on the right of the second image, also, you have a little bit of noticeable "stuff" left over from your photoshopping. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | solid effort at an original joke. Curses on you though since I set aside tons of stuff to devote one or two hours to reviewing a (semi)serious article lol. looks like I'll have to find another to review. |
| Final Score: | 40.5 | if its not too much work, I would do a little bit to revise the things I pointed out, otherwise I got a pretty good kick out of this. |
| Reviewer: | -- 20:08 EST 8 Feb 2010 | |