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This took me a long time to write, and I'm still kind of "meh" about it. Also, tl;dr. --Pleb SYNDROME _{CUN medicate (butt poop!!!!)} 20:53, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	5	There are moments of promise, but it goes off into too many tangents, or base humor.
Concept:	7	I'll give you points for concept; it's an interesting angle.
Prose and formatting:	4	The prose isn't stand-out, and the formatting makes my eyes bleed. Do better.
Images:	4	The images, while of a decent quality, are pretty much irrelevant, especially the captions.
Miscellaneous:	3	Penis jokes? really?
Final Score:	23	The concept shows promise, but this article needs serious work; perhaps even an overhaul.
Reviewer:	Sir Judgement F@H UmP VFH {talk}