Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Sweatshop
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Sweatshop[edit source]
Reminiscing on my first year of uncyclopediating reminded me of how good this is, although the formatting could do with some help, maybe, I don't know. -- 15Mickey20 (talk to Mickey) 20:27, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Had me laughing at a few parts. |
| Concept: | 9 | This was a well thought out article I can tell. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | May I suggets proofread? |
| Images: | 9.5 | Images don't get much better than this. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | The little side graphics are hilarious though that banner how Sweatshop is a fir trade organization is greta but belongs someplace on the article where it doesn't distract from the reading. |
| Final Score: | 38.5 | Brilliant article make it a tad longer and more organzied adn I'd vote for it. |
| Reviewer: | --Dr. Fenwick 23:00, 24 September 2007 (UTC) | |
Regarding the issue of length, did you read the sections on menswear, ladieswear, etc? Because while the main page is a bit short, the entire thing adds up to quite a long article. People not clicking on the links is my biggest worry with the article. Thanks for the review. I'll have a little fiddle with the layout. -- 15Mickey20 (talk to Mickey) 11:31, 25 September 2007 (UTC)