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Spawn[edit source]
Hi. I'm new here and I'm trying to save the Spawn article from the mess it was. I still have a lot of work to do, but I wanna know if I'm in the right track. Anybody can tell me?
Collex 00:44, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | This article needs alot of work, I've changed some of the jokes but I'm not re-writing it all for you, its a good idea and can be a funny article, keep at it. |
| Concept: | 6 | The idea is good, the implementation is bad. Still alot of potential here so don't waste it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | The English in this article is appalling, I've improved it but it will still need work, make sure to read the article back to yourself |
| Images: | 3 | The first image I laughed my arse off, so you get 3 points, a few more images after you expand the article and it will make a big difference. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Average article at the moment, but take this advice and it can be better, you're only new and you've done well, hell my first article sucked. Keep up the good work. |
| Final Score: | 22 | Hope to see this up for review again after some extensive improvements. |
| Reviewer: | --Projectmayhem666 Talk 00:16, 25 February 2009 (UTC) | |