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Robert Fripp[edit | edit source]

Started it a little while ago. Tell me what you think of it. --Murder Frog Dull interest wanes. 16:11, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Humour: 8.5 Hillarius maximus. There are a few issues though. I'll just bullet them off.
  • The second paragraph under Early Musical Career sort of dips the overall funny of the article when you're talking about his school life. You know, how he didn't get girls and had to turn to ska. It is more than made up for by the paragraph that follows, indeed, but I guess you could still fix it.
  • The ending. It ends a bit abruptly. If possible, include a discography (and give names like In the Home of the Hobbled Gnome) before See Also.
Concept: 7.2 Catching. Although he's no mainstream musician, he does have a set of loyal followers. It's great that you managed to hold on to the image of Fripp that we get in the beginning. Most writers drift halfway.
Prose and formatting: 8.5 Nice. No praises, no complaints. You could add a phrase from one of his songs, though, to break the monotony of the solid paragraphs.

And seriously though, remove that ugly template.

Images: 8 Excellent. The picture of the chicken cracked me up like an egg. Geddit? Geddit?
  • If you add a Discography section, add an album cover.
  • Wanna include the pic of a stadium on fire? Caption it Robert Fripp was here?
Miscellaneous: 8.1 Averaged your score. To fix:
  • The abruptness of the ending
  • (nothing else to fix, but I have presented a few suggestions)
Final Score: 40.3 Might be VFH. Had a great laugh reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Have a great day. --Tumb13weed (talk) 11:41, 22 June 2013 (UTC)