Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Pentium 4 (3rd review)
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Pentium 4[edit source]
This is the third review request made for this article in 2009. Although I was quite happy with the response I received from the last one, it was by no means the end of my ambition to make the article even better. -- The Colonel (talk) 02:32, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
- Edit: Apparently, the lack of excellent images is till a major problem with this article, but I don't really think it's something I am going to fuss about at the moment. -- The Colonel (talk) 02:59, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Could do with a few more jokes in here, Pentiums known for their exploding and burning people alive type stuff to add to the humour. |
| Concept: | 7 | It's similar to the article on Microsoft but I'm going to let it pass because I don't like that author and this article is funnier. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Grammar and spelling is fine, no complaints. Article structure however, it looks bad, could do with neatening. |
| Images: | 6 | The images could do with improving, images and captions aren't that funny but at least they fit |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Good article, room for improvement though, has potential. |
| Final Score: | 34 | Hope to see this up for a 4th time, maybe next time I'll nominate it for VFH. |
| Reviewer: | --Projectmayhem666 Talk 00:02, 25 February 2009 (UTC) | |