Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Muffgasm
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Muffgasm[edit source]
| Humour: | 5 | There's some interesting stuff in here, mostly towards the beginning. However, section "Gore Muffins" drags the article down by being too long, and not funny. |
| Concept: | 7 | Decent enough concept. With more work, it could be pretty good. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Some uncyclopedic formatting errors, and red links. That list is unnecessary. Gore muffins is way too long. |
| Images: | 5 | Appropriate, near the beginning. Michael Moore, the naked fat man at the desk, they all need to go. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | You need less quotes. Also, better ones. |
| Final Score: | 27 | Rewrite the last half of the article, stay on the topic of muffgasms through the whole thing, remove extraneous comments regarding cruel dictators, politicians, or liberal moviemakers, and I think you'll have yourself a decent article. |
| Reviewer: | Sir Groovester | Contributions | Talk Page 13:25, 4 October 2007 (UTC) | |