Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Man confuses AIDS and Aides.
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UnNews:Man confuses AIDS and Aides.[edit source]
Alexandros 17:28, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
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Behold! A flowering perennial of most becoming prodigious-ity has taken root. Sensitive sinus sufferers beware: this article is under the green thumb of |
Hey Alexandros! Just read a bit of it! Very promising! I loled. Anyhoo, I'll get around to this sometime Friday. Ya' know, I really ought not promise doing anything during my routine Friday delve into epicureanism: I don't even know where my pants are! Seriously, I'll get this done today. I'm really sorry. I'm just so lazy. I WILL DO THIS. SOON. Again, apologies for any inconvenience! Mightydandylion 
(talk) Fk 19:31, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 2 | I don't wanna sound uptight, but certain are only funny every once in a greeeat while. AIDS, for example can be funny if its done right. But this article was more mean than funny (in my opinion). And no, i'm not british. |
| Concept: | 8 | The concept of the aritcle is verrry good. I feel that if you did a rewrite of this article it could be funny as hell! |
| Prose and formatting: | 6.3 | The formatting and everything was as good as any other Unnews page. The spelling and grammar was good. So I'm giving a 6.3 |
| Images: | 2 | There were none to speak of. So, I can't highly rate that part of the review can I?
Maybe, next time around you should slap in a picture even if it's hastely made. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Nothin to say here. |
| Final Score: | 26.3 | Overall, I loved the news story. I would suggest a rewrite. But, I am somewhat of a noob, so maybe you shouldn't listen to me. |
| Reviewer: | --Bobofosho2 21:17, 7 June 2008 (UTC) | |