Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Linux (rewrite)
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Linux[edit source]
I'm so going to get hate mail. -- The Colonel (talk) 12:59, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Somewhat funny, but a lot of in jokes and tongue-in-cheek stuff that People who aren't familiar with Linux wouldn't get. A good addition could possibly be one of those "Wikipedia has an article on_____" things, that might help people get the jokes more. I am not myself a Linux user, but have some friends who do use it, so I get some, but not all of the jokes. More in the prose section. |
| Concept: | 9 | The concept behind this has great potential. It is somewhat predictable, which in this case is good. For this topic, if I were writing it, I would either write about how Linux sucks, sort of what you did, or Give a detailed description of how it's a Hacker's playground and could cause the fall of the world as we know it. One of those two. Very nice. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | The main problem with the article is that the prose is, in my opinion, slightly too serious for the jokes contained within. People sometimes don't understand that they're jokes. It's hard for the casual reader to discern fact from fiction, what is supposed to be funny and what is just supposed to be supporting fact. Try being slightly more outrageous. Exaggerate a little. |
| Images: | 8 | Pictures aren't overused or intrusive, and all images contribute somewhat to the article. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.5 | It's a little bit Isolated. Add a couple links to other pages. don't go overboard, though. |
| Final Score: | 38.5 | Mostly just work on making the article funnier to the non-linux-savvy person. deviate from the fact a little more, just don't be so subtle. |
| Reviewer: | --Dorsalfrog Prime 17:34, 6 June 2009 (UTC) | |