Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/J.P. Morgan
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J.P. Morgan[edit source]
I'll piss on your article if you piss on mine. AmericanBastard 02:19, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
- Flyby: too random. --Mnb'z 18:58, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Pretty Funny. Nothing that knocks you off your chair but it is funny. |
| Concept: | 5 | Typical "rich guy is evil" concept. It could be better. The various "twin" sections are a nice twist. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Good grammar, makes article a little funnier with its authoritative stance. |
| Images: | 8 | Good use of captions. I wish that one of these would have been photoshopped with more satan or something. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.5 | It is the beginning of something funny. |
| Final Score: | 34.5 | Overall it is beginning to be funny. It could get to VFH with a little extra work. |
| Reviewer: | FookYooChineseFood 21:20, 28 February 2009 (UTC) | |