Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/I Lost Your Pet Ferret
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I Lost Your Pet Ferret[edit source]
A little thing I whipped up. It was based off of a conversation with a friend, which in turn was based off of the conversation here: Forum:Hey Guys!. Keep in mind it's supposed to be like a one sided phone conversation, so keep that in mind in terms of grammar and formatting. --
Kaizer the Bjorn takkun 
(nya nya) (1961 model!) Check out T61! 03:29, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Dead on Stoner. Plus, this has to be one of the funniest titles I've seen in a long time. |
| Concept: | 9 | Great concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Not amazing- it's certainly passable, but the prose itself isn't hilarious. Then again, I guess it's not the focal point of this article. |
| Images: | 8 | Not riotous, but they get the job done. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | The article made me laugh a hell of a lot. |
| Final Score: | 40 | Good article, but it needs a little work. First of all, as you say, it's supposed to be a one-sided phone conversation. But I can't shake the feeling it'd be funnier if you had him occasionally responding to invisible replies- ie, I don't know why, man, because I was high! You do this a little at the start, then stop. Other than that, good show, sir. |
| Reviewer: | --SirIsaac 22:49, 13 February 2008 (EST) | |