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HowTo:Throw a Fireball

I think this one is almost ready to be promoted to FA status. Its last pee review was very helpful, and I've incorporated all the suggested changes. Can I get another opinion before I throw it to the ravenous pack of wolves that is VfH? --Hyperbole 01:22, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

Yes, It is VFH IMO. This is Naruto's DJ Jasper's signature. ProfileTalkASA

Hi!
I, Methamphetamine, am here to pee on your article. If you can, please let me pee. Thank you, and good night.

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Humour:	8.2	I won't be as specific as I did in my last pee review. I have never in my days as an Uncyc user (On and off since July '07) have seen a HowTo so funny(HowTo Be stupid in 21 days is an exception). The toilet humor still gets me, even though I'm 15. But you don't use much sarcasm. You need sarcasm to succeed!
Concept:	9	The ideas to make this are decently thought up. It actually sounds as if you were really training somebody mixed with a bit of humor.
Prose and formatting:	8.6	Good sentence fluency, but YOU NEED EMPHASIS. To make a good article you NEED it.
Images:	9	The images go good with the article itself, seeing as there isn't much.
Miscellaneous:	8.7	Avg'd.
Final Score:	43.5	43.5. It should be VFH'd.
Reviewer:	This is Naruto's DJ Jasper's signature. ProfileTalkASA