Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Speak a Foreign Language
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HowTo:Speak a Foreign Language [edit source]
I Would like some feedback on this--CrabPope 17:13, 16 June 2007 (UTC) HowTo:Speak a Foreign Language
I may not have done this before but I'll give it a shot. If there is some type of "newbie guide" let me know. --Eiyuu Kou 00:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | It is a little funny but someone else may think it is funnier. Nevertheless I just see it as something that can be added to to increase the amount of tastes. |
| Concept: | 5 | It seems a bit random. You may have put thought into the organization of the article but it could of gone farther. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | There is a lot of space and not enough text. Some of the the names of the people during the conversations could also be italicized just to make it more interesting. |
| Images: | 4 | I like the picture with the sword but it seems irrelevant. The previous picture, I did not get and was also irrelevant. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | The tip was funny. It is kind-of an inside joke, however because I do not know how many people know about classic Greek art, if it has anything to do with this. |
| Final Score: | 28 | Ultimately an article that could be improved on. A little organization, more pictures, and jokes could go a long way. |
| Reviewer: | --Eiyuu Kou 00:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC) | |