Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Female Video Gamers (Re-resubmit)
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Female Video Gamers[edit source]
I'm re-resubmitting Female Video Gamers for Pee Review. I have added more stuff and made it funnier. Thanks for the help. --333pet 16:00, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7.5 | At first the article seemed a little bland, but the more I kept reading, the funnier it got. |
| Concept: | 8 | Great idea, definitely something to be included in Uncyclopedia |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Fairly readable and flowing. The 'Unified Gamer Theory' part doesn't seem to fit where it is after the conclusion. Maybe if it was moved up higher. It kind of kills the main joke the way it is now. |
| Images: | 7.5 | RE: Booth Babe. Maybe something should be mentioned in the article about her, to go along with the image. Other than that, the images fit the article nicely. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I really laughed at the items and stats that you should/shouldn't give to a "grl". |
| Final Score: | 38 | A pretty funny article that eventually ends with a funnier punchline. I suppose some might not think that the whole punchline idea is that great, but I think it's pretty appropriate here. |
| Reviewer: |  Spillin DylanTALKEDITS 03:52, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
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