Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Everybody Hates Dubya (Television Series)
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Everybody Hates Dubya (Television Series) [edit source]
Tried about three months ago but it fell short touched it up a little bit, but hopefully it will work this time I have no problem with whoring my article out.--Dr. Fenwick 01:43, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Pretty good, and I can't really think of a lot of improvements you can make. You barely mention some facets of the show that you bring up, but don't add so much of everything that the article seems convoluted. |
| Concept: | 8 | Didn't seem amazing in concept from the title, but once you started elaborating it proved to be very Uncyclopedian. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Format seems to very closely mimic that of a wikipedia article on a TV show, which is good. Make up some bullshit about the show and say it's remarkable and unique about the show in the introduction. |
| Images: | 6 | Most images are well-placed, but you could do with a couple more of them (try and photoshop Bush into a video still of some movie about a predominantly black school). |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Work on some spelling and semantics, as it gets confusing in a couple places. |
| Final Score: | 38 | Very good, don't be afraid to make it even more absurd (without going overboard). Keep rolling with it and you'll have a popular or feature-worthy article. |
| Reviewer: | --Kickflipthecat 17:31, 16 July 2007 (UTC) | |
Thanks I appreaciate the review.--Dr. Fenwick 02:22, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
- Didn't I do some largescale touch ups on this one? Why is it tagged for proofreading? --THINKER 03:30, 17 July 2007 (UTC)