Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Dr. Nefarious
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Dr. Nefarious[edit source]
Don't piss on this... I suggest you review this only if you know what Ractchet & Clank is.
Mad Scientist Adam Mada 00:04, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
I'm doing this! --Some Idiot 10:03, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
Humour: | 5 | In this section I will go through each section and detail some improvements you could make.
This score is just below average, because I believe it definitely has improvents in the way of humor. |
Concept: | 7 | Good concept, though you still have room to build on some of your ideas as I have detailed above. You continually remind us that he is gay, so your article has bit of meaning. |
Prose and formatting: | 4 | This section really does hurt your article. First of all, you writing style. It feels to me rather rushed, and to add to that your spelling and grammar isn’t that great. I recommend you put the {{Proofread}} template on your page, or copy your article onto a Word document and do a spell check. You also needto slow down and make the general style of writing a bit slower and much clearer.
With the problem of formatting, there are a few tips I want to give you here.
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Images: | 3 | Yeah, there are heaps… but none are actually that funny. I’ll go through each picture, say which is hopeless and which has potential.
And you could definitely get some better pictures. Some from the actual game, battling Ratchet and Clank. These pictures aren’t that great and there are heaps more you could get. |
Miscellaneous: | 4.75 | Averaged your scores. |
Final Score: | 23.75 | So, 23.75. As you can see, this article has some big problems. With the right improvements, however, this article could definitely jump up in quality, and in score. I hoped none of the stuff I said here has sounded harsh, I’m only trying to help fix up this article, and I hope I have. |
Reviewer: | --Some Idiot 10:51, August 9, 2010 (UTC) |