Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Dawn (Resubmit)
User:Banjo2e/Dawn[edit source]
Since this article is a Pokemon article, it is automatically hated by various people. Therefore, I have to make this article into the Best Uncyclopedia Article Ever. It's undoubtebly not there yet. Therefore, whenever I think I have made enough progress to *possibly* get it back into main Uncyclopedia, I am going to resubmit it for Pee Review. (Also, when I move it to main Uncyclopedia, I'm going to remove the "Emergency Room" template.) NOTE: There is also a version just for the people who like the "old style" Pokemon articles, identical to the one I submitted to the first Pee Review for this article. Click the "trying to look at softcore porn" link at the top or the "Uncyclopedia's official Dawn fan page" link at the bottom to see it.
DO NOT REVIEW THIS ARTICLE IF:
- You are a rabid fan of Uncyclopedia Pokemon articles
- You are a rabid hater of Uncyclopedia Pokemon articles
- You have any kind of preconceived notions towards me
You want to censor all pictures of boobs on the site (They want to be free!)Wait...I do too... <insert flash of MIB mind wipe device here>- You do not intend to give an actually useful review of the article.
Thanks for helping me revive this article.
--User:Banjo2e/SIGGY 00:57, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
Second Review[edit source]
| Humour: | 4 | Meh, never really watched Pokemon, so some stuff either were just Pokemon or random humo(u)r. Try broadening the audience a little bit more so more people would be able to understand it. |
| Concept: | 6 | A pokemon article isn't exactly original here, of course, but at least it's not that sexual, and I have no clue who Dawn is. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Moose. |
| Images: | 4 | I've already seen most of those images many times, some of them don't exactly fit with the article. I mean, of course they all have Dawn in it, but some I just don't get, and others aren't exactly funny, just random and obvious. |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | I think it's a good idea to remove the "Dawn's Awards" list at the bottom of the page, for it just seems boring and tacked on, most likely going to make readers skim through it. |
| Final Score: | 24 | I'm not too sure about this article, it doesn't really seem to be going anywhere, just keep working on it and maybe it'll move on. |
| Reviewer: | --Narf, the Wonder Puppy/I support Global Warming and I'm 100% proud of it! 19:21, 28 September 2007 (UTC) | |
- I'm not counting this last one, because they didn't sign it, and for pete's sake they wanted the same old Pokemon crap (this guy wanted Porn Star Dawn, fer cryin' out loud!) --User:Banjo2e/SIGGY 12:50, 28 September 2007 (UTC)