Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Christ Sponge

Just wondering if this article I've worked on is any good, I designed the pictures and all so I hope it's good. Aquaseal 20:01, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	5	In some parts, the humour really made me laugh, but in other parts, it fell flat. In fact, most parts fell flat. The introduction, was good. So was the "powers" section. The quote by Billy Mays I found funny. If you get rid of all the Paris Hilton stuff it would be much better. Also, the part with the formulas was just downright confusing. It made no sense, and was not organized.
Concept:	7	I like the concept. You could make an easily featureable article out of this. You just need to expand the funnier parts of the article.
Prose and formatting:	6	It was rather choppy. It had very brief sections, quotes everywhere, and the formula part was downright ugly. Also, you should use the asterisks in the "powers" section to make it look more like a list. Also, you should spread out the images more, and perhaps take out the second one.
Images:	9	The images, in my opinion, were excellent. I think they were well photo shopped with the picture of Jesus on the sponge. The second image could be removed, and the third image was glorious as well. I think the images are very good in this article.
Miscellaneous:	6.75	Averaged scores.
Final Score:	33.75	If you could get the article to match the quality of the images, you would be in for a real winner of an article.
Reviewer:	Staircase 02:04, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

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