Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Child Supremacy
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Child Supremacy[edit source]
| Humour: | 5 | It could be funnier. |
| Concept: | 7 | I do like the concept. It could be expanded upon. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | I recommend having an overall ideology section. Hell, put a list of notable child supremacists and a list of other child supremacy groups. Also make a list of anti-chid supremacy groups. |
| Images: | 4 | The first image is pretty funny. The other two images weren't really all that funny, but they do go with the article... Whatever... |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | I'm suprised there was no mention of the Kids Next Door. They should definetly be part of the article. |
| Final Score: | 27 | Pretty good article. Might I recommend looking at Wikipedia's article of White Supremacy or their article on Black Supremacy to get some ideas on how to format the article better? |
| Reviewer: | --Dexter111344 01:01, 3 June 2007 (UTC) | |
I did look at wikipedia articles, h*ll, that's where I got most of the ideas from...--Dr. Dolittle 13:17, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
But I'll take your other advices--Dr. Dolittle 13:22, 3 June 2007 (UTC)