Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Chet Culver a.k.a Serpentor
Chet Culver a.k.a Serpentor[edit source]
I've cleaned up this article slightly and changed its name from the original title as I believe the premise was missed by the original reviewer. It is intended to be angry (who could like Sepentor) and silly at the same time. It is not intended to bash democrats (which I am). The premise was suppose to be Chet Culver came out of no where in 2006 and might be Serpentor. The external links have been added to make this clearer, as well as another photo. This article was first reviewed by hyperbole and I'd like another perspective. Hope you enjoy the read --Cheapinitreal 07:45, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
Umm, I guess I'll try to do my first clean up of something other than my bathroom. I is on teh case!!!1!!one!!11!omg!!11!!!!1!!!11!1!1!!1 HaLoGuY007 00:37, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
I don't really understand this joke... "He was elected the Federal Liaison of Fascist Party-Pooping Terrorist Masturbation in 2008." It really is just toilet humor, something like one word, like something about Cobra things. HaLoGuY007 00:44, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
For the DNA template thing, you should put Chet Culver in the part of the Serpentor article that talks about Serpentor's DNA being used. HaLoGuY007 00:46, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
I didn't really understand the ending, especially with Rockford, please clarify. OK, I'm gonna try to score now. I hope I brought a chair with me to the table. HaLoGuY007 00:59, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Pretty funny jokes, I liked the original "brought to you by Viagra" |
| Concept: | 8 | Really funny adding the Serpentor aspect, which obviously completely just made this article. This was the source of originality. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | TON of formatting mistakes, probably should have checked it over before sending it to Pee Review. |
| Images: | 9 | Really funny images, even better captions. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | |
| Final Score: | 38 | Sweet article, loved the images, good work. |
| Reviewer: | HaLoGuY007 01:01, 14 May 2008 (UTC) | |