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I have created this page in a style of a big article. It contains, quotes, pictures, sections and a censored part. But is it funny, or just stupid? Chaoarren (talk) 19:16, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5.5 | Not great. Things that would be funny are misplaced. |
| Concept: | 7 | The concept isn't bad, it just needs more work. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6.5 | Grammar is correct for the most part, but it's awkward and out of place. |
| Images: | 3 | Looks like it's made in paint, which I wouldn't mind, if that was the theme. |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | Lots of unnecessary stuff here. |
| Final Score: | 24 | Needs a lot more work. Don't use common cliches and censoring is fine, but it needs to be funny. Don't give up, and make sure to ask for help if you need it. |
| Reviewer: |  16:59, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
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