Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Aqua (band)
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Aqua [edit source]
Pasmorade (talk) 20:57, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | to be totally fair, it is reasonably funny, but there's soooo much room for improvement on that front. It does feel more like a slightly vandalized wikipedia page at the moment. The humor seems to just consist of them pissing off Mattel (which is true, but that's all it's got). |
| Concept: | 7.5 | the concept it there, it just need some expounding. There is literally nothing on the band members themselves, which would make for several easy sections. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9.9 | maybe if I went full grammar assassin mode I'd find something, but I didn't and it looks nice and clean. also, no broken links!!! YAYYY!!! congrats |
| Images: | 5 | without sounding mean, are these all just stock images? that CAN work, but it really does detract at least in my experience. 99% or more images on here are photoshopped, and it kinda just adds to it, as well as protecting you from some goober going after you for using an unedited image. Even just a little but of photoshop makes it night and day, and is a easy way to show that you put in effort (even if you didn't, i mean, who's gonna know) |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.9 | - just an aggregate score |
| Final Score: | 34.3 | some sections on band members, more on what they do, maybe some stuff on how Barbie World has "damaged the youth" and rotted their brains or something... there's LOTS of potential here, and it feels like an early draft for something potentially featurable. Its in no way bad, just in need of some TLC and touches to get it up and running! The bones are there, just gotta add the flesh. (ok. that was a horrific analogy. i am so sorry) |
| Reviewer: |  M K 15:01, 5 January 2026 (UTC)
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