Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A Cat on a Laptop

Flymousechiu (talk) 21:41, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Humour:	4.8	Good idea... not very well executed. The pictures were good for a smirk or two, but still...
Concept:	7	The idea itself has been done before, but it still has plenty of potential. There's a lot of untapped potential I can see in this article, it just needs a little TLC (Note: This score will drop to 0 if this article turns into a Lolcat-style format)
Prose and formatting:	6	It's difficult to rate the spelling and grammar, as... well, it's supposed to be written by a cat. The style itself for the cat works well enough, but it's kind of ruined by being pulled out of it at the very end by a human. I feel like it could have been done better if the whole article was written "by the cat" (Again, see the note under Concept)
Images:	6.2	The pictures were alright. In fact, they were the sole cause of me smirking while watching the article. Still, I feel like this is getting uncomfortably close to Lolcat territory, and the fact that they're hidden unless you hover the mouse over the words doesn't help.
Miscellaneous:	6	Average score
Final Score:	30	I said this once, I'll say it again: The concept is decent enough, and there's plenty of potential sitting here, it just needs some more time and a bit of editing.
Reviewer:	Pax was here. :P (talk) 13:24, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

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