Talk:United States School of Military Raping

Seriously, the idea came to me in a dream. Jdude 11:20, 22 October 2006 (UTC)

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How to make better? Jdude 02:51, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

Firsat off, how about more Tact? i mean the idea isn't really that funny anyays, it's a disgrace... My opinion, burn it and try again. but thats just me. Chucks220 02:54, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

It's not just me, lookup Steven Dale Green [1]. Jdude 08:13, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

I think it'd be a good idea to make your point faster. Get rid of the quotes (I always look past them), and put together a solid opening paragraph explaining the purpose and idea behind this school - then elaborate. - Lemon. 20:35, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

It's tough making rape funny. Even as satire, there's that fine line between potent satire and just making the reader feel dirty.--Sir Modusoperandi ^Boinc! 11:26, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

True, very true. There's not much you can elaborate and write more the program without putting in too much. But it's supposed to be potent in that you talk like it's the most normalest thing in the world, and what are all these people whining about, thus satirizing. Jdude 02:25, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, my difficulty was mostly that the original premise -- that the Army deliberately trains soldiers to commit war crimes -- never developed into good jokes, and didn't really exploit the possibilities of political and/or cultural satire either.----OEJ 22:56, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

This is more like a 'what if'. If tactical military raping were a real discipline practiced and taught in schools then what would it's Wikipedia article look like. Is this better, added a public controversy section to make it sound like any of the other generic public outcries you hear on the news. Jdude 02:25, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

Thanks!--Jdude