Talk:The Morgue
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Humour: | 8 | I thought it was pretty humorous. It started out slowly with facts and then built off the facts to make a ridiculous, but genius article. You should spice it up a bit though. Add in some fake random facts around the article. |
Concept: | 9 | It's a nice concept that basically states that morgues are a big conspiracy. I recommend that you see if you can integrate this conspiracy theory into other conspiracy theories. Also try to continue the "The Coroners" section. It would spice up the article a bit if you can make it humorous. Also maybe add a "Famous Coroners" section. |
Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well I fixed all of your spelling errors that I saw and the format of the article is fantastic. Your sentence structure through some parts of the article could be worked on a bit. |
Images: | 8 | Your use of images is great. I loved your model of the morgue image and your zombie. Add more images once you expand the article. |
Miscellaneous: | 10 | Not Applicable |
Final Score: | 43 | Keep writing and if you need any help, I'm here. |
Reviewer: | -Scout JoshHJ's Page and His Talk 03:15, 30 May 2007 (UTC) |