Talk:The Al Pacino Academy of Shouting

Not enough shouting!

This article needs more pictures of Al Pacino shouting! He shouts in hardly any of these pictures! I'm sure many screen cap opportunities exist! If I'm wrong, there's always photoshop! / A hog staring at a wristwatch! 20:23, September 13, 2009 (UTC)!

• Too many redundant red links need to be cleared up as well. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate). 16:24, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Pee Review

Humour:	9	This is really good stuff! I love the warning and picture at the beginning, classic. The last half of the article is the funniest to me, I particularly like the instructors and notable alumni page.
Concept:	9	This is creative as well as funny. Mostly I really don't like it when an article and content are pretty much just someones idea (I'm guilt of that though lol) because the end result is pitiful, but you did a really good job here of creafting the fiction and including the references.
Prose and formatting:	6	well, it's not very encyclopedic, but I really don't think that's a problem for the entry, it definitely stands on its own two legs otherwise.
Images:	10	I will actually say that your use of images could not get any better at this point. The choices are excellent and the captions are funny. anything more would be clutter and anything less wouldn't be as funny. (this is the first ten I've given btw)
Miscellaneous:	9	This should make up for the formatting score. This is an article that i think needs very little added to or taken away from.
Final Score:	43	Excellent article, keep it up!
Reviewer:	Skinfan13 21:40, October 15, 2009 (UTC)