Talk:Separation Issues

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Ok same as usual, what do you think? --—Braydie 20:29, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

I really like it. Especially how the pictures sort of make the text seem like a maze (and that's not sarcasm either). --EMC ^[TALK] 00:29, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

Hehe, thanks. I prefer using old paintings to illustrate rather than photos, I just think it's better for some reason. --—Braydie 13:36, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

Anything else? --—Braydie 19:19, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

It's lighter with the recent changes, congrats. Keep on fine-tuning (yet I can't point exactly which parts you could still embetter) and it will be VFH worthy very soon. -- herr doktor needsAcharge  [scream!] 17:38, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

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Hi! I just created a skeleton for this article this afternoon. I've only included one real paragraph. I have a few ideas for "What to do" that I'll add later tonight (tonight where I'm sitting). I'd be very pleased if some of the other sections could be fleshed out *in the same vein.* Please! No references irrelevant to the topic.

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(Fixed Pee headline so it links to ardickle. Good luck.) ----OEJ 04:13, 30 June 2006 (UTC)

One idea that popped into my head is that maybe you could toward the bottom of the article write a sentence or two entirely in "your mom"s and then link them so that the links read like the original sentence. Example: Your mom your mom your mom Mrthejazz 17:04, 30 June 2006 (UTC)

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Separate and lift? or...lift and separate? The choice is a difficult one.

Indeed, as in the image at right, anxiety may not only separate but lift and separate even as it shapes and molds the Two Essential Curvatures and Four Inessential Declivities. Thank GOD! for science. ----OEJ 22:40, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

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Sorry -- probably my entire post was irrelevant to the topic. It kept popping into my head every time I saw your article's title and I finally went mad.

However, if you Google "separation anxiety" you find that dogs suffer from it, as do pre-toilet-trained children and adolescent stoats. But remember, the European definition specifies "Separation anxiety that arises at a developmentally inappropriate age (such as during adolescence) should not be coded here unless it constitutes an abnormal continuation of developmentally appropriate separation anxiety." Consider a mental disturbance code from F40-F49 instead.

You might consider including a view of separation issues as a platonic Oedipus complex. From the online dictionary of mental health: "For example, as the artist Otto Dix once said, all wars are fought over the pudenda. We’ll just have to make the best of it and play the hand we’ve been dealt."

So perhaps for ideas you could do a bit of Googling and incorporate your findings in the article. Or not...I dunno. ----OEJ 07:44, 7 July 2006 (UTC)