Talk:Neil Armstrong
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From Pee Review[edit source]
I think this is a fairly decent, workmanlike article; I just think it's missing something. Any ideas? --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 09:23, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | It's just not funny enough. Jokes are few and far between while fictitious history isn't terribly funny |
| Concept: | 7 | I like the idea of him being an actor starring in the moon landing hoax, but you need to take that further |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Nothing really wrong with it. |
| Images: | 3 | Not doing anything for me |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Don't want it feeling left out |
| Final Score: | 25 | "workmanlike" says it all. Comedy and workmanlike don't go. If you can't think of something funny to write don't fill in the rest of the article with boring fiction: It'll just make people miss the good bits |
| Reviewer: | --Kelpan 23:04, 4 April 2007 (UTC) | |