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History of Man[edit source]
I would be pleased to have some constructive criticism of this piece. I put quite a lot of work into the links, so please do (at least) hover the cursor over some of them...Thanks in advance! --Pieface 13:39, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Halfway there, if you can't think up your own, steal some |
| Concept: | 7 | This low only because its too Wikipedic, be the Uncyclopedia |
| Prose and formatting: | 9.5 | Very nice, except too many red-links, would have been 10 |
| Images: | 9.5 | Again, very on topic...hint think a little more twisted. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Scored by Rothchild-Horshack putrification test |
| Final Score: | 37 | Great looking, some good word play, add some one liners, fix red-links, yeah, definately, definately |
| Reviewer: | — H. Peebles - D - HS    13:59, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
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