Talk:Hodgepodge
From Pee Review[edit source]
Help, por favor? --Ljlego 01:29, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Needs more humor. Seems a bit stale. |
| Concept: | 5 | A "C". Average, but could be better. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Improve the formatting; it'll look a lot better |
| Images: | 4 | Needs more pictures. Search the image database or look at nonsense for images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | No comment. |
| Final Score: | 25 | It's off to a good start. However, it needs a bit more work. I'll help you with improving it and will put it on my watchlist. |
| Reviewer: | --Starnestommy (Talk • Contribs • FFS • WP) 04:00, 10 March 2007 (UTC) | |
From Pee Review[edit source]
I put this up a little while ago. I retooled it and did generally what I was recommended to do. Just want some new feedback.--Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 18:15, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | Very dry wit, except that someone might misinterpret the remark about the first dominant species and infer that you meant to say Jews are evil. I suspect only the best of intentions myself, but I might munge it a little. |
| Concept: | 8 | Linguistics jokes are well-worn in intellectual circles, but still funny after all these years. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | This is clearly not the work of a 13-year-old AOLer |
| Images: | 10 | Just for seeing Hello Kitty taking a shit. Did you make that yourself? It looks like a ripe candidate for 4chan's /b/ section. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Try to use more obscure languages. Everyone knows 'Achtung' from playing Medal of Honor on Playstation. |
| Final Score: | 45 | Det är mycket god! |
| Reviewer: | Hanumizzle 19:00, 23 April 2007 (UTC) | |
Some comments by a rather drunk and silly Dutch person[edit source]
Hodegepodge would fit in rather nice with astronomical theories about the so-called dark matter in outer space. You could use this association in either the discoverers or the creations section. Check
Elron Hubbard was married to Roberta Heinlein, but it was not a happy marriage (Roberta being the first female Navy Seal in the US forces evar, but then she went unlisted due to a rather nasty and progressive disease).Nope
The planet formerly known as Uranus is henceforth known as Urectum (Stole than from [Futurama]) Funny, but I don't like stealing
That said, I will now proceed and cast my vote on VFD. -- di Mario 21:51, 9 May 2007 (UTC)