Talk:GarbageLand

From Pee Review

Humour:	6	A few good ones in here, the "Take a shit wherever the hell you want!" policy tickled me as did the Nuclear Bomb rollar coaster ride. I'm glad you resisted the temptation to use any obvious jokes poking fun at random people. Though I think its got some good jokes in there it is (for this N00b) a bit short on funnyie here and there. How about somthing about the "Stranglers" singing "golden brown" on one of the rides? I'm sure there are other songs you can link in...
Concept:	7	One of the more original Ideas I have seen in my short time as a N00b here and I think there is more scope for this one. It's nice to see something which is genuinely new. Maybe a bit more about the history of the place? Or where they get the rides made perhaps?
Prose and formatting:	6	Could tell much not wrong here But eye ess nowt expert in the field... With the exception perhaps of looking a bit plane in places but I think you can improve this by using the pictures a bit better...
Images:	7	Simshitty was a good one as was the pic of Macky D's, both worked very well. Why not make some of the pics a bit bigger though? Looks like you have space for it. I think this would make a big difference as you have clearly done some work with the pics and I feel your not using them to their full potential...
Miscellaneous:	7	(Averaged)
Final Score:	33	Generally I think the answer to your question is: Yes. This is funny... To me at least... I think that you could layer in a few more jokes here and there though. Maybe come up with a few more new ideas for rides, features and the like, but I say keep working on this one. Its got the capacity to be a very funny article with a bit more work and maybe some more funnies... Although as a N00b here, like some of your rides, I may be full of shit. Enjoy the smell...
Reviewer:	MrN 18:21, 25 November 2007 (UTC)