Talk:Fortnite and homosexuality

lies GoatLordServent (Talk) 20:13, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

Pee Review

Humour:	8	This article brings a little twist on the "fortnite is gay" joke to a rather good effect, and turns some rather immature bullshite into a pretty damn funny read. The addition of actual scientific communities and notable biological scientists, while not historically accurate of course, helps build a sense of legitimacy in the article, although the addition of Oscar Wilde feels a little shoehorned.
Concept:	9	This concept is very befitting of an uncyclopedia article, taking something that, on it's own sounds pretty dumb, and making it into a serious semi-encyclopedic entry. The more reserved nature of the writing style helps to an obscene effect here.
Prose and formatting:	8	The formatting and grammar of the article excels in the sense that it is an encyclopedic entry. The use of italics is befitting of scientific or encyclopedia, the writing style isn't too different from a regular wikipedia article, and greatly improves the humor of the article, overall it's exceptional.
Images:	7	The use of images in this article, while sparse, are used creatively and given some funny captions, even though they're not the best quality.
Miscellaneous:	8	Not much else to note, other than the article is a little on the shorter end, may need a bit of expansion.
Final Score:	40	This is a rather absurdist idea done the right way, plenty of articles try to take some dumb idea and apply it into a somewhat realistic situation, but not a lot can do it to a very good effect. It's a pretty good article, good work my man.
Reviewer:	---товарищ Rooomy of the Soviet Union (Yell at me woo) 20:30, 11 March 2021 (UTC)