Talk:Cindycar

Looks like you're looking for some criticism of this article? I think it looks like this could be rather good... I would say that my issue with it would be that it could do with looking a little bit more like an 'encyclopaedic' article. I'm not sure what all the double line spacing is all about in the later sections of the article, and I think it could use some more pictures. The admins here can be rather aggressive with their deletions, but I think this will be OK. Generally it does need some more work though... Enjoy. MrN 14:12, Dec 23

Consider it done

Well I un-messed up the formatting. Explain what you mean by "looking like an encyclopaedic article". Then I'll do that. ALCUS 15:45, 23 December 2007 (UTC)

Well really I mean that it does not yet look like our 'better articles'. I particularly don't like the 2007 Drivers (Those worth talking about) section. Well It's not really that I don't like it, it's just that I know from experience here that people here will not like the fact that it has lots of very short sections with a tittle, and only one paragraph underneath. Generally that's not considered a good idea. Perhaps they could be merged together a little? Or maybe done as a bullet list? I personally also like to see a few more pictures. It's nice if there is a picture ever so often, and the drivers section has none for ages....

I have added a <br clear="all"/> to the code for you. This can be used to force a heading or text to start underneath a picture. <br clear="left"/> or <br clear="right"/> also do similar.

It's a good article though, don't get me wrong, it's rare that I do not put an ICU tag on something straight away when it's created, but this did not need it in my view. Basically it's OK, just the layout is a little sloppy. But your new, so that's to be expected. Have you read the beginners guide? There are some good links from there to how to use formatting and stuff.

Just a friendly note though. You might consider not being so aggressive in your comments regarding who you want or don't want to work on your article. That is not likely to win many friends and really, this article belongs to Uncyc now. Kinda. ;) Have fun. MrN 16:06, Dec 23

Sure thing Mr.9000.. I've always been a sarcy bastard. I can't remember where I was agressive, but hey, I'll try not to be me. :) thanks for the reviews/advice. P.O. ALCUS 16:41, 23 December 2007 (UTC)

Knock yourself out

Go forit: if you know anything about Champ Car/Indycar, edit this page. (I can't be bothered). ALCUS 15:41, 23 December 2007 (UTC)