Talk:Canadian Tire

From Pee

I'd like a critique of this article, especially its tone. Alksub - VFH CM WA RV {talk} 08:07, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	8.5	Pretty funny :) I do like the tone, even though I've never heard of it, I get a feeling I know the place very well now!
Concept:	7	While not entirely a new idea, it is executed well.
Prose and formatting:	9	The style of writing is great, I really enjoyed it especially the phrase "customer's furtive fiddling" :) Also I think I only saw one typo/spelling thingy in the whole thing!
Images:	6	Theres only two. The quality of the logo one is a bit rough and the second one was a bit lost on me. But they aren't bad!
Miscellaneous:	8	What goes in this box anyway?
Final Score:	38.5	Overall I enjoyed this article, definately liked the tone :) Nicely done!
Reviewer:	~ Dame Ceridwyn ~ talk DUN VoNSE arc2.0 06:45, 31 May 2007