Talk:Black Adam
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From Pee Review[edit source]
| Humour: | 5 | Not many jokes per se; most of the article merely extols the power of the superhero character in somewhat exaggerated terms. |
| Concept: | 4 | Articles on comic-book/animated superheroes which do not place them in a broader parodic or satiric context are weak. I feel this article is conceptually weak because it treats Black Adam exactly as a comic would: as a comicbook entity in a comicbook world. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Technically fine. Restructuring would bring clarity to some of the sentences. |
| Images: | 2 | The image is just a pic of BA, no funny included. He should at least have the head of Daffy Duck or be wearing a tutu or something. |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | Personally I dislike articles which claim that so-and-so is the mightiest fighter ever or the ultimate ruler of the universe or has the biggest manjunk around. There ain't neither parody nor humor in stuff like that. |
| Final Score: | 20 | |
| Reviewer: | ----OEJ 02:46, 16 January 2007 (UTC) | |
I have to offer a caveat: I have not read a comic book for decades. I may not understand what is being attempted in this article...although I have seen enough articles of a similar nature that I have to think it is nothing special. This is of course merely my opinion -- the insane ramblings of a madman. ----OEJ 02:46, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
Oh, funny thing -- I keep seeing the title as "Black Admin". Now that might be a funny in-joke article. ----OEJ 02:47, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
- I thought this was an article on the idea of a "Black Adam", as in Genesis. That would've been funny. --Señor DiZtheGreat
CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 22:48, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
