HowTo talk:Be A Man
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Pee Review[edit source]
| link | score /50 | user | lowest score | date | comment |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be A Man | 37.5 | Moneke | Prose & Formatting: 5 | 9/24 | Aha! Moneke strikes again! I agree, maybe the formatting is awful. |
| Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be A Man (resub) | 38 | Andy of Comix Inc | Humor & Concept: 6 | 9/26 | |
| Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be A Man | 34.8 | Crazee Boy | Images: 5 | 10/22 | Another Crazee review. |
| avg = 36.8 --- lowest = 5.3 | |||||
| Humour: | 9 | It was hi-larious... in a manly way |
| Concept: | 8 | good concept |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | didn't like the formatting (maybe I'm not manly enough) |
| Images: | 7.5 | Good pics, but you should have had ones more related to the text |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | yeah manly |
| Final Score: | 37.5 | good article, needs better formating but the humor's great. |
| Reviewer: | --Moneke 08:10, 24 September 2007 (UTC) | |
| Humour: | 6 | Not as funny as J'accuse. I found that I did not laugh out loud at all during this one, thought I did think to myself, quietly, at the back of my head, "hmmm, that's funny". |
| Concept: | 6 | This concept is not quite as funny as J'accusse. It's hard when you've made a good article because people are expecting you to raise the bar all the time, which can be excrutiatingly difficult at times. Keep trying though! |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | A few red links, but nothing too serious. |
| Images: | 9 | Unlike J'accuse, these pictures are actually really good because you've made them work without the article. I like the Pokemon reference in there. Well, I don't LIKE it, I just find that extremely random, which I'm starting to like. Your style of writing is incredibly sophisticated and original; I love it! |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Things that made me laugh: the bit about purchasing getting a firearm. You know what they say about men with big guns, don't you? ("What," you say. "That they cause a lot of destruction and kill a lot of people?") Uh, yeah. |
| Final Score: | 38 | Look, it's not funny enough... it is, however, a good try, with some good concepts. I know that it's a HowTo, but at the begginning of the page, why say "HELLO, LADIES"? Is this supposed to be a transexual joke? Seriously, I'm confused. |
| Reviewer: | --Andy the Idiot 02:47, 26 September 2007 (UTC) | |
| Humour: | 7.9 | The overtly-masculine theme with gay references was just what I was hoping for, and this article delivered it. |
| Concept: | 8.1 | A how-to on being a man is a great idea, and you did it well. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6.8 | It looks alright, but I think could use a little straightening up here and there. |
| Images: | 5 | The images were a mixed bag. The man with a rifle was a good example picture, and the nerd was funny, but others make no sense, like the horse and Team Rocket. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | The article drags on a bit. You should think of trimming off some things here and there, but I'll leave that desicion up to you. If you straighten it up, the length may not be such a big deal. |
| Final Score: | 34.8 | It made me chuckle, and with some work, could be a real winner! |
| Reviewer: | Crazee Boy the passable reviewing furry | |
