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Why?:Is the ironing board out[edit source]
Seriously, this article? Probably crap. Written over, of all things, Bjork's Volta. I'm strange. 
Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 03:33, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
- Personally, I think Unknown user did an "okay" job reviewing this. However, it's too short for me to feel really okay. You know what I mean? You don't? Okay. • <-> (Dec 30) 19:05
| Humour: | 6.75 | First of all, I liked how this relates to couples everywhere that are on the "rocks". However, it doesn't really fit the criteria for a Why? and should actually go under Unscripts. Why?'s are supposed to convince the reader to believe, well, why he/she should do this or why something is. If you are intending this to be a dialogue rather than an explanation, I would move it under Unscripts. Once you decide to do all that, expand each section into larger, more dramatic scriptlike piece, not unlike a play. Better yet, make it like Curb Your Enthusiasm. I loove that series. LARRRRYYY!!! |
| Concept: | 8 | Pshh. Who the fuck left the ironing board out!!! |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Like I said before, make it like a play script rather than a Why?. |
| Images: | 7 | Liked the simple captions and proper images, but the other captions could be made longer and a bit funnier. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.2 | avged it |
| Final Score: | 35.95 | If you haven't seen it already, go watch Curb Your Enthusiasm, and get some ideas for this script from there. Good job. |
| Reviewer: | -- Sir Unknown U (Talk : Cont : VFH : PEE : CUN) 07:53, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
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