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This is nowhere near done. I intend to put a shitload of more story in there. Any tips? How do you like the idea? It's when you refresh the page, you get a new story. I had to nickname the main character Hans just because I can't re-put down a <option><choice> thingy. Is it possible? Any other helpful hints? Maybe I should make a thing where it {{ }} and links to each of them. Would that work? Input please.
so sayeth Sliferjam ~ Talk * Sock * Jam * Gallery * Fearless Fosdick? 01:23, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

First off, the format is <choose><option>Option</option><option>...</choose>. But I think something like this has already been done.-Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 01:28, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

I know the format. I was just saving space. I don't care if it has been done before. I know that you can weigh the choices. Are there any more tricks like that? Any idea how to use any other things? so sayeth Sliferjam ~ Talk * Sock * Jam * Gallery * Fearless Fosdick? 01:48, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

Well, the article seems like it'll be funny when it's done, and it's a pretty orig. idea, but why'd you put it on PR if it's not ready to really be reviewed(Under Constructions)? Most of the stories seemed too short to really write a helpful review for. It looks good so far, but it just doesn't seem ready for a full review quite yet. P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 02:25, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

That's really the author's decision to put it up if it's finished or not, you know... it's a pretty small non-issue. -- T​K​F​​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​UU​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​U​CK 02:34, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

Thrice noted. It's just hard to write a really nice review if you're trying to both be helpful and keep in mind that there's a lot more words coming.P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 22:14, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	0	None
Concept:	0	Don't Get It
Prose and formatting:	0	Stubby, not encyclopedia
Images:	0	none
Miscellaneous:	0	none
Final Score:	0	keep working on it, since it's your subpage, it can't be huffed, but if someday, you want it to become it's own article, keep on working.
Reviewer:	--Sir Manforman 18:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)