Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnScripts:Emergency Room
UnScripts:Emergency Room[edit source]
Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 22:37, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
| UnScripts:Emergency Room is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
Hey lego! • <-> Dec 02:07, 2
- Okay, I didn't reread it or anything, I just looked at your pictures.
| Humour: | 8 | Avg of all sections
Yes, above average introduction. I didn't give you a 9 because it's on the short side. It did make me giggle, however, and that is what I think Uncyclopedia is all about. Now, you can argue with me, but I do think Uncyclopedia is about giggles.
I liked how the scene dragged me in to the world of people who think they're sick.
It's actually turning into a story now. It wasn't as fast paced as the other two sections. Now, that does not mean that it's too long, it just means that it's mostly people walking and pressing buttons. Does that, uh, make any sense?
Nice. Gunshot wounds make everything more fast paced, don't they?
Good ending! Not as good as the gunshot wounds, but good nonetheless! |
| Concept: | 10 | Dammit, I wish I had this idea. Not only is it funny, but the characters are really human and awesome, and the idea is one that should've come a long time ago. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Stupid little text. Squint squint squint!
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| Images: | 7.5 | Re:George Clooney/ I laughed out loud when I saw that. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.4 | yeah yeah yeah |
| Final Score: | 41.9 | The problems are fairly obvious and easy to fix, Lego. I would like to see this again, and with just a little editing it probably would get VFH. In fact, since people like you, it might pass right now, but don't quote me. Did I help? |
| Reviewer: | • <-> Dec 02:28, 2 | |