Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Final Halo Fallout XIII
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Final Halo Fallout XIII[edit source]
| Humour: | 8.5 | What you have is really quite funny. Now add more of that funny. |
| Concept: | 7 | Kind of a ridiculous concept, but OK. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Not a lot of room to make mistakes, I think there was one or two though. I might just fix 'em myself. |
| Images: | 0 | Get Images. NOW! You could try requesting one at UN:PIC, or just look for someone who does any potatoshopping there and ask them for an image on their talk page. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | WAYWAYWAYWAY too short. |
| Final Score: | 28.5 | What you have is great!! There just needs to be more of it. I recommend expansion. As always, read UN:HTBFANJS for ideas, check out some of the upper echelon articles on VFH(also 4 ideas), and avoid humor that is totally random at all costs!!! For in that way lies madness...... good luck! |
| Reviewer: | P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon  (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 22:49, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
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I've removed the quotes. Remember that a whole bunch of quotes at the top of the page does not automatically make an article funny. -- 23:56, 11 June 2007 (UTC)