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~ Dame Ceridwyn ~ talk DUN VoNSE arc2.0 04:57, 02 August 2007
From Pee Review[edit source]
| Humour: | 6 | Not your best, but not bad either. |
| Concept: | 9 | The concept itself is very good, but the execution of the idea could be a little bigger and better. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | I caught one noticeable error, but fixed it myself. There's also one red link; just link age to old or something. |
| Images: | 8 | Good work from Mhaille, but the Marshall stack on the left looks as though it's floating. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | The problem with this article is that there's just so much you could expand into... it leaves you wishing there was more. Which is definitely a sign that what's there is good, but it seems like there are so many jokes left unsaid that could've been mined here. |
| Final Score: | 35 | Overall good, but might not be ready for VFH. But what do I know, I haven't written in months. |
| Reviewer: | -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 18:17, 2 August 2007 (UTC) | |