User talk:Zombiebaron/wip/The Adventures of Zombiebaron

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Skinfan13's evident hypocrisy...[edit source]

Humour: 0.5 OK, I'm going to go out on a limb and say this was a potentially very funny article that was never really finished (or started for that matter). So yeah, because of the huge lack of material on the page, I'd say there ain't much here in the way of funny. Really enjoyed your "Adventure to the Zoo" article also, so this is kinda disappointing to me. The .5 comes from the chuckle I got from the picture and the residual memories of the zoo article, but unfortunately in fairness to the other authors, I gotta keep your score artificially low...
Concept: 5 Coulda been potentially very funny in a self-referential sort of way. Again, a potentially good concept here. Therefore, your potential gets a perfect 10, your actual material gets a zero as it's, well a big pile of nothing lol. 0 and 10 average to 5.
Prose and formatting: 5 Kinda the same thing as the above two sections.
Images: 3 same thing again. I chuckled at your picture, and got residual chuckles from the "zoo" images too. But alas, that's a completely different article, isn't it?
Miscellaneous: 0 This is very underdeveloped. I'd actually like to see this article in a "written" state, if you will. Please do something with this, it could be quite funny!
Final Score: 13.5 Sorry mate, but you got nothing of substance here... see above bullshit for explanation.
Reviewer: -- Sf13 Upsilonsigmasigmacrest.PNG 0041 EST 8 FEB 2011