User talk:Seunketchup88
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Your changes[edit source]
OK, I had a look at UnBooks:I Know This Isn't Fair Girl, But, Your Foot Odor Has Driven Us apart. We Have To Break Up. In the main, the changes are good - I particularly like the last pic. However, the change to the conversations doesn't quite work. Remember, you have to be consistent here. It's supposed to be a letter from the guy to his girlfriend, so he won't put her name all over the place, he'll refer to her as "you" throughout. Oh, and at the end of the first section, you refer to it as both a story and a letter. For consistency's sake, I'd leave off the "The story", and go with "Written by an ex-boyfriend, it...". Pop those tweaks in place, give me another nudge, and we'll see. --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 22:27, Mar 5