User talk:Darwin of suburbia/Battle Royale
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| Humour: | 2 | The stuff actually "about" Battle Royale shows some promise, but the opening "wacky" quotes, the random non-sequiturs, "emos!", and "Chuck Norris kicks some ass hell yeah!!" references REALLY work against you. I'd recommend focusing more on the surreality/bizarreness of the movie itself, and not the other crazy stuff you can toss in. |
| Concept: | 10 | Battle Royale was made for a parody. |
| Prose and formatting: | 2 | Formatted just fine, but man is this article short. Really, really short. Could you flesh it out? |
| Images: | 1 | Images have little or nothing to do with the subject. |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | UN:HTBFANJS |
| Final Score: | 17 | You seem to have fallen for a vein of what we call "Fool's Humor". You're going to have to dig a lot deeper to get to the real, valuable stuff, but it's there. See: UN:HTBFANJS |
| Reviewer: | --Mejwell 14:06, 31 July 2007 (UTC) | |