User talk:Andorin Kato/RuneScape

This is my version of the RuneScape article. I'm currently in the process of cleaning it. Feel free to make comments and/or praise me leave criticism where needed. --Andorin Kato 05:07, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

Stuff to do

Will be updated as I go through.

• Make better quotes (half done 03:12, 21 March 2007 (UTC)) Confirmed finished 19:43, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
• Reorganize images and find some better ones 02:14, 27 March 2007 (UTC)
• Rewrite:

  Members 03:12, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

  Game box at beginning

  Graphics 19:43, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

  Language filter 05:38, 26 March 2007 (UTC)

  Clans (may need help) Huffed 19:43, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

• Expand Security section 19:43, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

03:12, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

From Pee Review

I am a dedicated Uncyclopedian, and I take pride in my uncommunity. When I stumbled upon the RuneScape article, I was horrified. So, me being the loyal patriot of Uncyclopedialand that I am, I've decided to take a squeegee to this article and CLEAN IT UP. So this is my version. I will admit right now that it's probably nowhere near, say, feature-worthy, and I don't think it's perfect either, but it's definitely a start into being a decent article. If it recieves good responses and review, I'll replace the current article with my version. Of course, if this version sucks royally, then please leave a note saying why and I'll do everything in my power to fix it. But that's what Pee Review is for, so I don't really need to tell you that. :) --Andorin Kato 03:33, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

Talk to an admin. The inside of a wiki is a complex thing, and putting a new font in while inexperienced could lead to all sorts of problems-Retrofuture42 20:47, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	8	Very Funny, but will need semi-protection and constant survelince at least to retain it's structure. It beats Runescape any day for Joke to Content Ratio.
Concept:	9	Ready made for parody, prehaps the most self confident MMORPG for what it actualy is.
Prose and formatting:	8	More or less ready to go. The new font is spot on.
Images:	9	The rest are spot on.
Miscellaneous:	8	Knocks the current article into an overpriced party hat.
Final Score:	42	Just secure the article page and iron out the faults before changing it for good.
Reviewer:	Retrofuture42 18:42, 28 March 2007 (UTC)