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tornado (film)

I gots this one. -Razorflame (contributions) Talk 02:56, 15 November 2007 (UTC)

Again, thumbs up.   Le Cejak • <-> 04:00, Nov 15

Alright, added some images, changed some stuff, please assist. --WarlockLord 23:55, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	3.3	Avg of all sections. (You have to have a header for bullet points, RF) P1(4)-Not funny. You should maybe try to add some humour by reading the beginner's page and using some of the humour tricks that you find here. P2(5)-A bit better, but still needs work...I don't find this funny, but maybe somebody else would. P3(3)-This includes the next two headings. No funny stuff in any of these two headings. You really need to read the beginner's guide and then add to this some more. P4(1)-The Fun Facts section has nothing to do with the article and detracts frm the article. I would ask you to consider removing this section of the article.
Concept:	5	The concept is there, but the execution of this concept is lacking. Consider asking someone else to help you with this concept.
Prose and formatting:	6.5	I just have to say that this article is SHORT. I also want to say that I had to go through and delete red links (links that link to nothing because the article doesn't exist). The formatting and grammar on the other hand are good.
Images:	0	No images. This is BAD. Get some and add funny captions to them. Maybe a picture of a tornado might help?
Miscellaneous:	3.7	Average of other scores.
Final Score:	18.5	This article needs a LOT of work. You need to expand this, because of it's shortness, and you need to add images. Follow these in addition to everything pointed out above and you will have a good article. I hope to see it in the future.
Reviewer:	-Razorflame (contributions) Talk 03:07, 15 November 2007 (UTC) This is where the REVIEWER's signature is supposed to go.