Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/iBauer
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iBauer[edit source]
125.24.160.39 23:56, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | This is my first pee review so bear with my, ok here we go! Overall I found the article quite funny, but all the names for the iApps fell short, It felt like a missed opportunity. Not all the apps for iPhones have i in the title so why do all the iBuaer apps? They don't all have to be funny as long as they aren't all the same, Just something like Allah-assist. The last joke fell a bit short with me. I think he should say something about some of the other equal opportunity devices they're going to make, like one for cannibals! PS. I really liked the full facial nudity joke. |
| Concept: | 8 | Not really much to say here, I like the concept a lot and I can't think of any thing that needs any improvement concept-wise. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | The only thing I think you can improve the way the CIA censors the iTorture part (Ok I know that's really small but hey I'm trying here!) Maybe use the these black bars and just make it all dashes, like so -------- |
| Images: | 7 | I think at lest one more image would be welcome, I think you should add one of Steve Jobs doing a demonstration of the iBauer. Image wise I think that's all it needs. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | What i thought of the article overall. |
| Final Score: | 37 | I quite liked it and I think with a just a bit more refining (And possibly a review from a more experienced review). It just may be VFH material. |
| Reviewer: | Fbi36 06:57, 6 August 2009 (UTC) | |